
//
rain patters on my window pane
beginning slowly
harshly then
almost demanding me
to break open the window
and allow them in
which i do
you see,
i’m weak that way
always giving in easily
even when i know i shouldn’t
and so these rain drops
curse my skin with its harsh blows
laughing at my sad little gesture
some cling onto my skin
some just drench me
and some infiltrate the area surrounding me
yet closing the windows now
seems almost claustrophobic
i guess i was being selfish
opening the window up
only for a little breath of air
and so i greedily breathe in
whatever i’m given
while the trees sway
through the torrid winds
none to say if in pain or joy
the sky gives one final rumble
almost like a taunting laugh
and the downpour stops
i guess even the rains
got tired of seeing my demise
pulling back the hair
that’s stuck to my face
i breathe my insanity in one last time
and close the window
bidding goodbye
to my once fallen self
//
| Mazel J
Today is 2nd of September, it has been 20 days since you have uploaded your poem (i like it). I know you cannot always be writing and it takes time but plz do such writings more often. And yes i just forgot to mention what you do is completely amazing and its LOVELY🌼Waiting in anticipation
(for idk anything you ll do will be gr8 i believe) 🙂
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well, i love this poem and the mellifluous words you used in this they are so amazing and deep
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